modern word architecture
We read future
out of tee cups.
Every thursday at 11 p.m.
and after tea-time.
We consider our past in the past tense.
Past future, past present.
Written should be read,
but every one went for a beer
or to the cinema or somewhere else.
Modern word architecture is being watched or heard.
We read future
out of tee cups.
Nobody can read words anymore.
We take photo
and replace thousand words
but no words are being read at all.
Modern word architecture
uses ancient technique.
Thank God there are kids and old people left.
The first ones have to read
the secondz know nothing else.
out of tee cups.
Every thursday at 11 p.m.
and after tea-time.
We consider our past in the past tense.
Past future, past present.
Written should be read,
but every one went for a beer
or to the cinema or somewhere else.
Modern word architecture is being watched or heard.
We read future
out of tee cups.
Nobody can read words anymore.
We take photo
and replace thousand words
but no words are being read at all.
Modern word architecture
uses ancient technique.
Thank God there are kids and old people left.
The first ones have to read
the secondz know nothing else.
posted by Anonymous at Thursday, January 06, 2011
2 Comments:
After reading good poetry, I don't feel the need to say anything more or write something about it. Good poetry should have a huge space behind it, where his words can grow in thoughts and not provoke words.
I just wanted to let you know - I didn't feel the need to say anything and I enjoyed the silence your poetry left me with. I enjoyed it for a while ... and that's what I wanted you to know.
Good poetry shows a view on what we normally call the world, which makes us feel slightly, that the world depicted in it, is just n o t the world we normally see. You have such an interesting way to look at things, to look at language. And I like your poetry - both in German and English. Unfortunately, I cannot understand the rest of them. I'd like to discuss some of your works with you... Keep writing!
thank you :)
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